Friday, August 31, 2012

Poetry Response 1


 Poetry Response 1
The Red Dress by Kim Addonizio

My favorite aspect of this poem is what it talks about but doesn’t say. When I read this poem, the narrator’s red dress is her persona. She wants the perfect persona to address the world in. There isn’t anything special about the dress itself, it’s what the dress does to her, how she wears it. The dress empowers her through the world, yet the outside world has no power over her. She walks past all the working class people at their blue-collar jobs because she can have anything she wants and hasn’t a care about anything else, all thanks to her red dress.

The Street Stephen Dobyns

What strikes me about “The Street” by Stephen Dobyns is the imagery. As soon as the poem begins, Dobyns starts in describing the scene. His descriptions are very real and seemingly exact yet I happened to find them simultaneously dull and strange. Usually, strange would mean interesting but Dobyns seems to have painted a dull world then placed characters in it doing thing that are either abnormal or described unusually. Or perhaps the world is not so dull but the tone. Regardless of what exactly it is, the poem, despite the unusual events taking place, the poem feels boring up until the last two stanzas in which all the preceding stanzas are strung together and the poem takes on a whole new life. Up until that point, it feels as if we exist in the black space, watching these twinkling stars like passing lights. However once we reach the end, we see the black space and the stars as a whole with all the parts woven together in a midnight tapestry. Without the last two stanzas, I would have missed the beauty of this poem. Which is to say I would be missing out on the beauty of life if I neglected to see how I fit in to everything else happening around me.

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